These changes make the the text clearer to me. I did not want to change the voice of the text, but I tried to clear out some verbosity and improve consistency. I did my best not to interfere with the logic of the prose.
This document seems written to stand on its own, so I recommend the following additions:
- a general explanation of the args param as in `controller: function(args) {` and `view: function(ctrl, args) { ...`
- a specific explanation of how {data: args} in m.request() becomes url parameters (mithril.request.md could use the same treatment)
- an explanation of the extras param as in `controller: function(args, extras) {` and `view: function(ctrl, args, extras) { ...`
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